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Winged Tragedy

Injured beauty fell.

Through pastels and brilliant shades;
landing softly.

I watched as yet again,
winged brillance was removed from earthly heavens;
Shot down through twilight.

I wept as the heart ceased to beat,

and found the feathers at sunrise.




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Prompt: Finding Feathers at sunrise

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  • poet2angels gold member
    July 17, 2007
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    Such a sad take on the prompt...Lovely expression in your poem..TY for entering!

    Lynda


  • poet2angels gold member
    July 17, 2007
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    prompt is:

    "finding feathers at sunrise"