Tell me the ways
of the everlasting wind.
Of the whispering nights
of my danting sins.
You the chosen one,
the one who is right.
Why can't you tell me
what's deep inside?
You suffered for glory
was it such a wise thing.
Just for you to be called king?
Oh messiah of the highest power
the order is yours
so stop this fire.
I come to you for help
still I dance with misery.
I come to you to say
help me stay sane.
I cry at night to hear your words.
You never speak
For am I cursed.
Bound to the light of your glory.
You suffered for king.
Tell me was it worth the pain.
Oh all the misery.
Help me oh lord.
Help me inside.
Why do i cry your name
And never hear a reply?
Is it because I sin
I will never know
Not until the death
or the end of time.
Dear messiah please free me,
I call on you for release.
If you are king why dont you save?
I tried to every night
Every day. Deep pain inside.
Free me messiah
I ask once more.
If you suffered
Doesnt that mean i need to suffer nomore?
Author notes
Um, dont know where this really came from. It was there inside.
A contest entry
- Prewrites by February Moon.
1750 points, ended July 31, 2007, 20 entries
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Comments
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This is very powerful. You should look it over again and correct some grammar errors though. Good luck, and thanks for entering.
Chelsea
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Opps, forgot to add my name. I am Swintha. enjoy reading this
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Swintha,
Love this ! So powerful and slightly complex.
A beautiful rhyming flow that holds the poem in lock
You should be very proud of this write =]
Stay safe
~Amanda
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