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Think Of Heaven

Think of a place

Where tears dry themselves
wounds heal
and rain stops

Color blind are the people
and children do not learn
how to hate

Disease is absent
and ill fated souls
are cured

Money talks but says nothing
and has no power
it cannot define you're being

Love is forever
and does not deceive,
lie, or cheat.

Think of heaven.




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  • W a s p
    August 3, 2007
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    Well written.

    Really good job on this...ahh...if only. WASP.


  • Whisper Trinity
    July 19, 2007

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    Wow this is really good. I like the stanza:

    Color blind are the people
    and children do not learn
    how to hate

    Its great! at first I was like why would you be color blind in heaven? lol but then my dumb ass got it great job hun your mom is going to go all gaga over this poem you know lol.

  • luvyaall bestwishes
    July 18, 2007

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    This is really well written It really captures what heaven's going to be like I think Great job!


  • Candice Bezanson
    July 18, 2007

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    thisnk of heaven. A place of o pain, hate, loss...This is a great thought. When the harsh realities of the world we live in seems unbearable we can think of our eternal walk with god and know that once we make it there everything will be ok. This poem was very nice and very touching. thank you for writting something so beautiful and sharing it!


  • Jadon
    July 17, 2007

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    "Think of a place"!

    So often places are associated as much with feelings as with sights. You grasped well the concept of "Show Me Heaven" as you guided me along and showed me what I should be looking at. I really like your write. You have done well.
    Amongst others your verse about money caught my imagination as I liked very much exploring the thought of how differently we might be preceived there.
    "Think of a place" and then the association with the absence of the 'ills' of this life and identifying that very place as heaven fits the bill very nicely.
    I enjoyed and appreciate your entry very much. Thanks Jadon


  • xHeartofDarknessx
    July 17, 2007
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    Beautiful <3 ... Good Luck ... So Amazing


  • SandraMVeinot
    July 17, 2007

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    'Think Of Heaven'...

    ther is not a day goes by that I don't think of heaven...what a wonderful place it shall be whether a heaven or a paradise or a haven it's all the same in my eyes a wonderful place of eternal rest and peace...

    and I thank you for the lovely reminder..and for sharing your words with us your viewers....

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