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The Dark Side Of Love

The Dark Side Of Love
is full of hatred

and sabotage

and revenge

 

Sabotaging the other's

chances of happiness

and enjoying it

Enjoying The Dark Side Of Love

 

Hating their perfection

of each day

Making sure something

makes their day as horrible as yours

 

Enjoy The Dark Side Of Love

Seek revenge  on them

Enjoy it

while it last

 

Before your game is up

And you're crying over them

Enjoyed the dark side too much

and you will lose it

 

She has ended your fun

you enjoyed it too much

you plan to get

revenge

 

on her and her 'new' love

she loved you

"only you"

she lied

 

you stalk her at night

watch her every move

plan her last breath

and his last flutter of the eye

 

you finally get the courage

follow them to 'his' home

you pick the lock

wait for the alarm

 

there is none

no sound

but them

breathing 

 

you go up stairs

silently

you treasure her

face, in her silent slumber

 

her LAST slumber

and his LAST slumber

their LAST slumber

 

pull the knife close

practice the motion

PRACTICE

PRACTICE!!!

 

In a minute you can get

her back

for breaking your heart

the voices in your head repeat in a careless whisper DO IT DO IT!

 

you come close

to their faces

and to their neck

gag them sharply

 

No regret

they are awake

hands and feet

bounded and gagged

 

you play with

their emotions

make them cry

remind her why

 

why you're here tonight

with a knife and gun

tell her

"IT WAS THE DARK SIDE OF LOVE"

 

she nods in a full sweat

he is knocked-out and still bleeding

he is past died

and your not done yet

 

You tell her

why you always did what you did

seeing her mad 

made you happy

 

she nods

you rush the knife against her neck to torture her....

you get a rush

from her scared look.... 

 

 

TO BE CONTINUED............. 

 

 

 

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  • r0yaltysfin3st
    August 14, 2007

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    i absolutly loved reading this poem it very clearly describes what almost everyone who has lost a love feels but is too scared to admit.

    I cannot wait for the continuation


  • Abstract Image
    August 4, 2007
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    i loved reading this poem it flowed and had a nice use of words...good luck
    ~Wolf~


  • darkened light
    July 19, 2007

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    Ooooh.. it's like you were in my mind when you wrote this. haha.. this poem definitely gets the blood flowing. Excellent job on this one.

    Darkened


  • EternitysLastWish
    July 17, 2007

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    Oo-er... I think my heart just sped by about 50 x what it's meant to! To have great imagery is one thing, but to change someone's heart rate is a remarkable talent.
    Very expressive, and get's right down deep inside the mind of the speaker.

    Very well done!
    ELW

  • karmacae
    July 17, 2007

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    dark indeed. I really enjoyed this piece. Cant wait to read the rest when you finnish. Good job, and good luck in the contest.....


  • Deathbyconfusion
    July 17, 2007
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    ohh

    tell me when the next 1 come out because this is ur best yet!!!

  • Deathbyconfusion
    July 17, 2007
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    great

    good as usual but u called me emo?? >o< lol ok its good though luv ya hope u win!!!!!!!!!!


  • Sle3p
    July 17, 2007

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    i saw this contest, there's like 50 other ppl in it! I hope ya win cause this is the best poem you have written!

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