Darkened souls within
amber and topaz skies
beauty evoked by Satan's guise
A great ball of fire
twisting
turning
yearning
Magnetic energy burning
The strength beyond any will;
Striking down, fiercely still
Bolts as bright as any can see
needing to be set free.
striking
spinning
winding
Static energy delivering
Within the storm, amber fires burned
Peace being spurned
Nature's anger....
......set free.
Author notes
Stardust-luvr
POD
I'm trying a new style from what I'm used to thanks to the energy I was getting from the image.I hope it works!
http://s19.photobucket.com/albums/b185/specialStar/?action=view¤t=twofish69_27882408.jpg
The picture was created by Phil Staples, who happens to be a very good friend of mine in UK whom painted the picture used for this creative write of energy. Thanks Phil xxxx
A contest entry
- The POD ~* by Arkbear.
300 points, ended July 21, 2007, 10 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - No place to put it..... by Menace.
2250 points, ended December 11, 2007, 32 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Pre-Writes from my Faves!!!! by PerfectImperfection.
675 points, ended August 19, 2008, 23 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Wowzers~
My Oh My this is a Beauty Sis and the Image...
just Magnificent~ also the words You penned
from it...the Inspiration~ Excellent!
Love how You wrote this piece...
took the Reader there~
The Energy also Imagery Stunning
Congratulations on Your shiny!
-throws confetti-
Woot~ 
Thank You for sharing Your Talent
Best wishes in all You do
with love & light~ Desire~*~
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Holy Moly! this is fantastic!!! OMG the images speak for themselves here! I love it!!! and this only got a bronze
Congrats on that, but I think it is worth more!
and love
Nyetta
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A very interesting piece to go along with the image which inspired it. Nice structure to complement the flow here as well. Well penned. Thank you for your entry!
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Great write....captured the essence of the pic wonderfully...love the internal rhyme you have used also....
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This is tough.
I like the format, the style, and the flow. On the other hand, I find poems about nature or the like never do it justice and therefore avoid that category like the plague. I'm really not sure how I feel about this. I have read about 25 entries in two hours so I will come back to it. -
Wonderfully written and my congratulations on the Bronze trophy awarded. Wonderful image that inspired this write filled with energy yearning to be released.
Mouser
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Excellent
Very wonderful descriptions. A great poem for the picture. Congrats on the bronze.
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Very nice....
....this is being entered into the finals ~
Love your genre and your Most *uncommon* Theme !
If you keep it *uncommon*...I will keep reading ~
The best to you ~
Great job ~
Ironic, how I would allow a Poem mentioning
satan into the finals...Arrrgggg!
But...I have to give credit, where credit is due....
....and that credit goes to the Poet....YOU!
But...if it doesn't win, it's not because of
you mentioning satan ~
I am a Fair Judge ~
Best to you ~
Smile!
Bear ~
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Very unusual picture, and then can see where this poem comes from. Different use of space in these lines - creative and filled with energy.
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What Energy!
I was at first taken back by the darkness of the writing - then loved the ending where you captured the energy!
The picture drove home what your words said!
Loved it!
Tang
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Excellent,
Such vivid imagery here my dear.
I just love the new flow and form,
and the content is so captivating...
Thanks for sharing, and all the best,
within this contest sweet soul..
Much love, Timothy
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