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The Shadowlands

Wandering from the gates of infinity
Trying to pick his faces from the heavens
I saunter down the forest path
Wishing he was here
Missing my dear
The Shadowlands lay out before me
Draped by a canopy of black leaves
And broken hearts
Who know where the forest path will take me
Beyond the star and everything I know
I don't know why he had to leave
And disappear beyond the horizon so broad
But I know that I will find him
If I have to go beyond the stars

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  • Papyrus
    November 28, 2007

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    seek and you shall find. knock and the door will be opened. ask you will receive.

    I don't know why he had to leave, either, and I am deeply sorrow. but I've also said before that the best poetry is that which comes from real-life experience. it is a good step towards healing, you know.

    God is here to comfort all of us. He is beyond the stars, yes, but also here and now. we don't have to wait to receive his love and know him in an intimate way. yes!

    I hope you see your special one again. but most importantly, be filled with God's love that is so liberating and satisfying.

    amen!

    Pap