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To See Or Not To See

“I shut my eyes in order to see.”
~Paul Gauguin~



Beauty etched inside my eyelids
more telling and true than the
black white grays of the world.
more real and more raw than the
life death dying of the earth.

Lashes filter filth and hate
and all these eyes see is love.
Perhaps it would be better
to live inside my irises
to stare only at
the perfection
of my own
dreams.

And still my open ears hear
the screams and cries of fear
the dead and dying on the earth.
Still my open arms can feel
the last embrace, frantic appeal
that I open these eyes to their torment.

Can these lids showcase the wonder
of a simple sunrise?
Would these lids recall the shape
of my soul-mates silhouette?

They say eyes are the windows of the soul.
Open them and taste the breeze,
hear the sunshine,
touch the stars.



~The eyes are the window of
the soul....English Proverb.

~“Blinding ignorance does mislead us. O! Wretched mortals, open your eyes!”
Leonardo da Vinci

~“Its marvelous what you can see when you open your eyes.”

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“I shut my eyes in order to see.”
~Paul Gauguin~

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  • AngelEyes13
    March 3, 2008

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    WOW! Okay, love the poem, love the quotes, and love love love the picture! Great job all around and thanks soo much for entering my contest.


  • Kuranya gold member
    September 8, 2007
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    What a sheer piece of brilliant writing, I clicked on random names on the online list and came here to read, what a suprise and a delightful one at that, you have captured the essence so well in this piece, I too close my eyes in order to see..... brilliant, I would like to bookmark if that's ok

    Karen


  • zillion
    September 8, 2007

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    Nice quotes. I think they go very well with the theme of this contest, as well as your poem. Nice thinking.

  • Cinnarry gold member
    July 22, 2007
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  • darkheart76
    July 17, 2007
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    wow

    loved it

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