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Feeling the Rhythm of Dreams

little fella,

in from active
preschool play,
snacks
--(cookies and milk)

panting slows to breathing,
tiny chest feels . . . beating

eyes widen--
  awestruck wonder!

    mommy, um, mommy, um
    when I was, um, drinking milk

    Jesus was knocking on my heart!

dropping dreary dishtowel,

I delighted fresh
    in him,

    in marvelous precocious perspective

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TRUE STORY-- from my little fella

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  • Cupcrazy gold member
    July 17, 2007
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    Beautifully written


  • Riftkin gold member
    July 17, 2007

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    this is a perfect poem for this contest and any other that wants a childs point of view or a spiritual one.