Be still my heart,
Absorbed in your tide, tumbling in your storm
Your tsunami cobbled against my stones
My mind slips beneath the warmth of your waters
Giving you my miracle like a golden child
Reaching between your breaths
Pushing the sun, and grasping the moon
Illuminating your sands and whispering to your mountains
Your gales song glittering in my heart
Numbing yesterday’s pain
Inhaled by desire, I sink to your wants
Exhaled by yearnings, I rise to your needs
Enveloped mysteries unraveled by consumption
Embedded treasures once lost are released
Unrestrained beams frolic, tickling spirals downward
Caressing shore, then fleeing to sea
Moon kissed glow saturates your current
Drizzling on my tongue while I taste your salt
Riding your waves, I chisel into your depths
My board bobbing in your motion
Whirling of your pool torrent against my vessel
Propelled into your agitation
I reach for the moon,
Pulling orb into your sea
The heavens doused,
The sun rose
In a list
A contest entry
- Give Me A Piece of You - for the MEN Only by StormGoddess.
740 points, ended July 30, 2007, 15 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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This is excellent! The imagery superb, the word choices, wonderful. Thank you for entering and good luck Storm
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um wow ok fisrt i thought it was to do with the sea and then i saw the deeper meaning very good. loved the first line. it was very potent and wow. go you
good luck in the contest
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this is great and please do not stop your pen from writing.


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WOW
a very deep piece of you indeed...this is so sensual and very imagery formed within each line that one would have to sigh with a deep breath after taking it all into their soul...
Blessings
~Cheryl~






