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Seducing The Moon

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Be still my heart,

Absorbed in your tide, tumbling in your storm

Your tsunami cobbled against my stones

My mind slips beneath the warmth of your waters

Giving you my miracle like a golden child

Reaching between your breaths

Pushing the sun, and grasping the moon

Illuminating your sands and whispering to your mountains

Your gales song glittering in my heart

Numbing yesterday’s pain

Inhaled by desire, I sink to your wants

Exhaled by yearnings, I rise to your needs

Enveloped mysteries unraveled by consumption

Embedded treasures once lost are released

Unrestrained beams frolic, tickling spirals downward

Caressing shore, then fleeing to sea

Moon kissed glow saturates your current

Drizzling on my tongue while I taste your salt

Riding your waves, I chisel into your depths

My board bobbing in your motion

Whirling of your pool torrent against my vessel

Propelled into your agitation

I reach for the moon,

Pulling orb into your sea

The heavens doused,


The sun rose

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  • StormGoddess Greeters member
    July 30, 2007

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    This is excellent! The imagery superb, the word choices, wonderful. Thank you for entering and good luck Storm

  • SeaWithYourHeart
    July 19, 2007

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    um wow ok fisrt i thought it was to do with the sea and then i saw the deeper meaning very good. loved the first line. it was very potent and wow. go you good luck in the contest

  • Riftkin gold member
    July 17, 2007
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    this is great and please do not stop your pen from writing.


  • CherylAnn
    July 17, 2007

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    WOW

    a very deep piece of you indeed...this is so sensual and very imagery formed within each line that one would have to sigh with a deep breath after taking it all into their soul...
    Blessings
    ~Cheryl~