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What Happened to Rainbows?

Through browning field,

past willow stroking pools
no longer blue

I wonder why

sky is void of hues.

In a list

A contest entry

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  • AliceinPoetryLand gold member
    July 17, 2007
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    A stunning write that flows beautifully!
    Gaylene


  • MissPennyLane
    July 16, 2007

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    I've realized that there may have been a system glitch, because the same thing happened with "Cupcrazy", where her piece didn't show up as anything more than the "reserved" title, which was the same as yours . Im really sorry about the confusion on my part. I'm going to applaud this in place of it getting to be judged, again-i'm very very sorry!
    Amanda

  • MissPennyLane
    July 16, 2007
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    Your piece was not written within the time limit, and I gave it some lee-way, but I judged it before I got to it.

    This is however, a great piece-vivid with imagery and you did a great job of using the prompt!