Rage
Rage, rage, the name of my captor
consume me for tonight
blacken the text of the oncoming chapter
and disregard all that is right
Rage, rage, my sovereign lord
aid me in my conquest
hang me with a hateful cord
and lift us up above the rest
Rage, Rage, my humble king
expand to the depths of my consciousness
become my life- my everything
exalt me in your lifelessness
Rage, Rage, the darkening cosmos
nurture me in self-denial
close the channels, block the flows
and let the hollowness defile
Rage, Rage, my driving force
blacken out my memory
leave behind each trail and course
betraying me in poverty
A contest entry
- 3 Part Contest: Part 1- Rage [[BIG POINTS]] by GiftedPsychosis.
1500 points, ended August 7, 2007, 26 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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This one sounds like a song to me, which isn't a bad thing! I love the rhymes, great.
So great job and good luck in the contest! -
Rage clouds many minds and captures many hearts. If only we could let go pf that rage then maybe this world would be a better place to live in.
Love be the message,
Peace be the journey.
Justin
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