Spilled ink upon my pages
drift through finger's grace.
A lasting thought lingers
before taking it's final place.
Burnt memories disguised
as words begin to trace,
the licking flames of sadness
etched upon my face.
Spilled ink upon my pages-
my thoughts to hold their space.
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A contest entry
- Quickie with a Twist by MuddyKing.
1300 points, ended July 16, 2007, 8 entries
Honorable winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Liked how you used the prompt in this poem - flows well and a nice HM to add to your collection too. Congratulations.
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Thank you for the comments, most appreciated.
Storm
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Oh wow hun, this is so wonderful. It does evoke deep emotion. Very well written. Best of luck in the contest.
Jeannie
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Thanks Jeannie, appreciate the comments.
Storm
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nice take on the prompt
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