Standing at a shore
between earth and mighty sky
a blue tide washes me
rinses child into my eyes
There's something strange about this
I can't find the voice
it escapes me like the warm spring waters
rushing in this world.
So fit me for majesty
for tonight I am royalty
I'm dressed in nothing but the rain
and an angel's lips.
I've just got a feeling that this is right
And I'm bound to get lost in it.
Everywhere I turn, you are before me.
Close my eyes, and fall, and I'm lost in it.
You were a star that fell from the sky
as I danced my heart in the rain.
Your eyes...lost myself in your eyes
and all the fires of heaven surround us.
Standing here, where worlds collide
between yesterday and this moment,
a blue melody washes me,
rinses hope into my eyes.
So fit me for majesty
for tonight I am royalty
I'm dressed in nothing but the rain
and an angel's wings.
I've just got a feeling that this is right
And I'm bound to get lost in it.
Everywhere I turn, you are before me.
Close my eyes, and fall, and I'm lost in it.
don't leave me falling...
So fit me for majesty
for tonight I am royalty
I'm dressed in nothing but the rain
and an angel's eyes.
I've just got a feeling that this is right
And I'm bound to get lost in it.
Everywhere I turn, you are before me.
Close my eyes, and fall, and I'm lost in it.
Author notes
is a collaboration between myself and jesse peacock, also known as Never...hope you like!
Please tell me what you think
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When I read a poem I automatically start to edit it.
Finding the best word or phrase through my eyes.
Like where you add mighty to sky, introducing a break in rhythm.
But sometimes when we stumble it is not a mistake.
the pattern repeats
yet is never the same
love is a garment
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I'm so glad that people like it, lol.
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me too, darling. me too. *smiles* it's only this beautiful because of you!!!
<3
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*Sighs* I wanted that to go on forever lol
That was so beautiful and entriguing what a beautiful picture I had in my head if only I could draw I'd paint you a picture but I can't sorry!
I love your poems.
Hope your well.
Love and Light.
~Raven Tears aka Tamara~
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thank you! yeah, i'm not on much. spending most of my time working on my fic...*laughs* is at 22 chapters now..so...
how have you been?
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I definitely like this, Amy--and the repeated refrain adds an almost hypnotic quality to the poem. A pleasure to read.
Bill
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