[3.2.1]
Its your blast Off bby;;
&&guns go;
BANG BANG BANG
3 shots to your pretty little head.
Oh babydoll,
it looks like your dead.
Cue your h.o.m.i.c.i.d.e.
&&[insert.my.happily.ever.after.here]
Author notes
This is just one of those writes that came to me, i was in the shower and the first two lines just popped into my head, i hope you guys like it.
Option 4 for your contest, love.
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maybe if my hearts stops beating it won't hurt this much
xLovesxTragedyx
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[Stage fright blinded my eyes] Option 4 :]
A contest entry
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Comments
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There is one or two people that if someone knocked them off it would temporarily make my life ectasy. But in the end, it would be worse, for being on trial for homicide or even for knowing that I laughed at the face of someones death. Ah why do us humans have morals, it's easier without them, less messy! ♥
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I effing love it. Its so short && to the point. very evil.
I really cant put into words how much I love this write.
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i really love this one...so short and sweet but everything works so well...and i loved the wording you used...especially the ending...thanks for entering...good luck...
XweXareXbrokenX -
i really love this one...so short and sweet but everything works so well...and i loved the wording you used...especially the ending...thanks for entering...good luck...
XweXareXbrokenX -
I love this;
The best line was
"&&[insert.my.happily.ever.after.here]"
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whew, it's intense! filled with hatred & emotion, great write. thanks for entering & best of luck
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Thanks babe ... Another brutal write with 'hate' and 'humilation' running through the lines. I am glad you could express yoru deep&dark hatred towards someone in poetic form. always helped me! x
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amazing poem
very amazing. even better that it's a dirty pretty
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I believe this is the form known as Dirty Pretty? I won't lie. I don't like this form so it kinda killed the poem for me.
Love be the message,
Peace be the journey.
Justin -
i absolutely love the end of this b, it was reallyyy good. i hate you and your talentedness it is not even fair hoee,.
jkkk
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surprise!
i'm the first one to comment your poem for once! i think this is pretty cool. i like insert. my. happily.ever.after.here. && cue your homicide. that's an inspired line, babe i hope you win. i love you!!!
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i love you more
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