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Desperately seeking

Missing image
Desperately seeking the enchantress
who stole this Trouvere’s heart that day.

A glimpse of this Trobairitz caught at the café,
her beauty blending with spring honeysuckle.

Your song filled my heart with warmth and
I have not fallen to sleep without your
captivating smile and hazel eyes lulling
me into each night's slumber.

Desperately needing to tell you again


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Author notes

Vide n'entoure plus mon coeur.

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  • moon2u
    August 15, 2007
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    ENCHANTING

    OH MY...ITS SEEMS I HAVE HIT THE MOTHERLODE!
    I COULD READ YOUR WORK ALL DAY
    CONGRATS


  • Saffron gold member
    August 5, 2007

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    Congratulations on the gold--I knew this would win when I read it the first time. You need to find her, and tell her, you know...

    Congrats again (you really need to do this more often!)

    Saffron


  • Dalaney gold member
    July 31, 2007
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    congrats on your gold
    and what a wonderful entry
    this is Love, lane


  • mantis180
    July 30, 2007
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    Beautiful...


  • ellipsist
    July 30, 2007
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    beautiful... congratulations

    this is a very worthy piece...


  • Oisin silver member
    July 30, 2007
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    Thank you everyone for the wonderful compliments and also to ardentMarch for the theme and allowing me to participate.


  • checkmate
    July 30, 2007

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    Beautiful write! Great work and congrats on the gold! This piece certainly deserved it

    Great job!

  • tigress3737
    July 29, 2007
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    Aww, what an adorable and lovely poem!


  • tara wilson gold member
    July 23, 2007

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    I love this one so much...
    "A glimpse of this Trobairitz caught at the café,
    her beauty blending with spring honeysuckle."...
    beautiful...thank you for your entry!


  • SummerlandRayne gold member
    July 17, 2007

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    Oh my...this is just perfectly lovely! I felt like I was wisk away to a far away city. Such a desire to find this one you seek! So nice this was!
    Blessings,
    Azlyn


  • Nicolette gold member
    July 17, 2007

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    This is such a lovely interpretation of the contest theme...a moment captured in time and the longing to recapture some of that magic. Lovely poetry.

    ~ Nicolette


  • La Belle Rouge
    July 17, 2007
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    Longing

    Filled with the beauty of wanting...something more. Lovely work as always.


  • Night Hope gold member
    July 17, 2007

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    "A glimpse of this Trobairitz caught at the café,
    her beauty blending with spring honeysuckle."

    Ahhh, a lovely telling, my Friend. Good luck in the contest, Scribe. Wanda


  • LadyLavender gold member
    July 16, 2007
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    loved the affect it had on me, cinema released, imagery, vividness...Beautiful!

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