When I met you I was not who I am today I was broken.
I just had completed a part in my life that I was sure
that I would never love again. I did not have it in me anymore
I felt like I gave everything I had in my past and was left
standing with an empty heart that had been broken.
Then the seed was planted there between me and you.In a moment
that neither on us could control,we connected and it started
growing from there. I should have ran but,I stay there willing to see where this was going to go. You offered me something I never had you honestly gave me your heart for no reason other then you felt like giving it to me with no string attached only in return my heart and slowly I gave it to you .
And as the days pass I am learning to love again and I am slowly learning to recieve love from you. And as everyday ends
my heart is healing because of the love I share with you.
Please tell me what you think
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Good write here
Once broken you wait for the right one to share trust and truth instead of physical interests . Life goes on with a smile -
cute
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Great write
So it is true for love one only has to reach out to the hand given . And true love comes with growth from being together and learning to give
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sweet
this is sweet,sounds like you were blessed with a love that came right when it was supposed to,I could feel your words...this write sound like it would brings hope for those who think it could never happen to them,and describes a blessing that holds a promise that fate,and, destiny do exsist. -
A BEAUTIFULLY WRITTEN PIECE
i understand where you are coming from in this poem i have been there myself the poem is beautiful and honest testament of you feelings towards the other in your life
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Second time around..................
they say is better than the first!!!! I however am still waitng for my second time around. You have been blessed to receive such a love and a second chance for love to heal your heart. Seize it and hang on for dear life because this one sounds like a keeper!!! This piece poured out your very soul and I enjoyed reading of your renewed happiness and new found love!!!Thanks for sharing!!!~~Toni~~
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NICE, ive been hear i liked this, i would chop the sentances up a bit to inject a little more pace into the piece but good job I felt your emotion
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beautiful
Love happens in such unexpected ways. It makes me think of the love in my life. One of the sweetest poems I've read. I know there are so many people who could relate to this. -
Sometimes moment is - moment, sometimes we need a years to see, Nice written, a bit strange form to me because it is written like story with breaking lines but actually this is a story-poem. Nice feelings of love.
~Sonja~
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This is a lovely tribute to your love I sure hope you shared this. Loved "my heart is healing because of the love I share with you" Love is a beautiful remedy. God bless you
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This I can relate to very well
although I have been hurt and am still hurting
nothing would ever stop me loving again
and in time a new love can mend a broken heart.
Hugs to you and I hope everything works out well
onesugar.
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