dr-dr-drip those lies from your lips
don't let my shattering ♥heart♥ stop you
[not like you ever have before]
neverever will you change;;like a broken record that always plays
make my heart sk-sk-skip another beat
[baby this is it for you and me]
Author notes
Option One
your heart is my symphony
A contest entry
- && I'd rather have a b r u i s e d pelvis;; than a //sha tte red\\ ♥ by PaintedParisPassion.
500 points, ended July 19, 2007, 27 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Beautiful written darling;; a beautiful tragedy, sounds just like my heart all day, every day ♥
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you are quite amazing with your words.
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very true about people... wonderfully written. Loved your classic dirty pretty is really good and can relate to the 'not as if you ever let it bother you before' kind of image;; i'm well used of that attitude being thrown towards me by the males in my life, past and probably future. Enjoyed it!
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i really really enjoyed this. =]]
loved it.
loved the image it gave me.
perfect.
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oh very true the malvoant acts towards me... they were very common, I must admit. beautifully written darling.
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im taking a wild guess that this is nickoles poem. lol.
yeaaaa you're most def. in a poemy mood tonight, and thats wayyy good. i envy you for this poem, its really really like beyond amazzzing. thanks for entering. :]
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