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Friendship

Such fun times we have had, what friendship,
And now another year has passed; is
Is it too hard to say you won't leave me forever?

College isn't forever,
Dear one, and our friendship
Will stay the way it is.

You assure me what you say is
The truth, and that not even forever
Can change our friendship

Remember this, you tell me: friendship is forever


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Tritina poem

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  • Disturbed Prodigy
    July 17, 2007

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    that is the beauty about being friends, i think you did a great job on this poem, keep it flowing and this is a wonderful piece