What can be done when the heart is broken?
Into pices, no one really knows.
Or cares about you.
As you, sit there alone, looking into your memories.
The dark places, with shadered faces.
Cries from deep in your mind.
Make you remember what he did to you!
The door slamed, the voices heard.
As you drew closer to them...Bang!
You, turn to see an awful site.
Blood all over the floor.
Treas go down your face.
The one, who shot the gun was.
The evil, side of your angel, he grins at you.
Comes closer..closer intil.
A bright light, comes through your door.
The wings white as snow.
A smile comes on this man's face.
He cudles you in his arms.
Whippers in your ear.
"Don't run away, this is all but a dream."
You, woke up from a nightmare or was it real?
Thats for you to decide, but the angel who was there.
Will always be right by your side!
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this was pretty and I liked it very much, a couple of misspelled words but still really good
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WOW thats really good
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There are a couple of misspelled words but other then that it's amazing how everyone feels about love one thing that remains the same is I think everyone has been hurt from it at one point.
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This is great!
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Nice
really well written
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wow, this is really really good. its-- wonderful actually. awsome job
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wow
Hey I realy like this..........it was like soooo good!I love reading your poems!Awwwwwww....you're such an excellent writer!!
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cool
good love is cruel -
like your conscience, the angle, the white wings, the disturbia side Vs. the compassionate side, nice poem
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nice
love is crule but no one can live with out going threwt it at least once.. never give up
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