I dreamed of strolling in a mist,
through evening shadows of twilight.
Heightened senses finding bliss,
in a lavender scent enveloping night.
Softly warm gentle breezes blew,
leaves like feathers swirling by.
Silence broken from a Dove's coo,
a forlorn sadness in it's cry.
Deepest shades of purple hues,
lurk amongst the Sunlit shafts.
Tree top boughs swaying in tune,
on sailing melodic nature's draft.
Majestic forest of oak and vine,
where my heart forever strolls.
Remembered from a relished time,
in sequined dreams of memories gold.
In a list
A contest entry
- Rhyming Ramblings by piccola.
700 points, ended July 20, 2007, 29 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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lovely dream
Inspiring through and through as it flows with feeling and color, softness of gentle love memories here
soothes the soul..so inspiring with sparkling alliteration..dreamy
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This was well worth reading. Some of my favorite words used and in such a well written way, too. The word relished ... I like that. Thank you for your entry.
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You've captured the senses in every aspect by this poem. It's as to be in this scene and envision those purple shadows, the fragrance of lilacs hanging in the air. This is hardly a rhyming rambling--It's a rhymed masterpiece in what you've captured and I truly enjoyed the read.
I have a lot of catching-up to do with you. The past few weeks have been hectic with car problems, computer problems and just came back from vacation, but I'll be reading and catching up with you soon!
Hope all's been well!
Jo
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beautiful piece of poetry , my hat is definitely off to you. Eddy
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So very beautiful the echos of a wonderful moment in time remembered. I really believe this is one of many of your best writes! You draw pictures with your words! I am in awe every time. Bravo!
"Majestic forest of oak and vine,
where my heart forever strolls.
Remembered from a relished time,
in sequined dreams of memories gold."
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