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My Inner Voice

As they spill onto the page with every curve and stroke,
with feelings and impressions that are not meant to be spoken,
my passion and my fear all my thoughts and my concerns,
they dance across the page with every loop and every turn,

My soul is aching to be rid of it's worries and cares,
and so my hand begins to glide graciously across the page,
words of love, pain, life, and sometimes rage,
I begin to write and the world goes away,
suddenly its harsh realities fade to gray,

Writing is my escape as if I had a choice,
it is apart of my soul,
it is my inner voice,
many things need to be said,
though words could not describe,
the feelings and emotions locked up deep inside,
they evolve and they absorb as time passes on,
I have learned that it is part of life's path,
and you will experience happiness and sometimes wrath,

A poets life is composed of many things,
pages filled with life long lessons,
and the harmonies that they sing.

Author notes

Criticism is welcome as long as it is honest. Celticbeauty

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  • nobodys-girl
    July 3

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    This was just beautiful! i love how writting just gets everything out. thank you so much for entering my contest and best of luck!


  • whispernthedark Greeters member
    January 17, 2008

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    Wonderful write, and congrats on your past gold wins, this is truly deserving. Thank you for sharing and entering the contest. Good luck.

    ♥ ♥ ♥
    whisper


  • N e a r
    January 16, 2008

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    "Writing is my escape as if I had a choice,
    it is apart of my soul,
    it is my inner voice," - I really liked this part with it's rhyme and such. It's nicely done.

    Your poem is really good in rhyme and rhythm. You describe yourself well enough that I can understand what you are saying and who you are.

    Good luck in the contest.


  • RedwingSpirit silver member
    December 28, 2007

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    celticbeauty Excellent work written here. Congratulations on both Golds I wish you the best of luck in my contest thank you for entering

  • jesseramsey
    August 11, 2007
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    Yeah!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    Thats my girl. m....


  • Beating gold member
    August 10, 2007
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    please follow the rules, or I will not be able to award you anything, or give you permission to proceed to the next round!

  • Beating gold member
    August 5, 2007

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    oh. wow. I'm speachless right now, I don't know what to say other than I love this! It's like you wrote out my feelings. I couldn't agree more.
    If you could just please follow the rules, then I'm sure you will go on to the next round!


  • Ale E
    August 1, 2007

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    Very good. I loved your ending stanza. It just pulled this piece together beautifully. Never stop writing. Thank you for entering my contest. I wish you the best of luck.


  • forget my memories
    July 31, 2007
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    Wow once again nothing bad to say everything just is so beautiful Do not ever stop wrting.


    • celticbeauty
      July 31, 2007
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      thnx you either. I try to put every ounce of passion and a piece of my soul into every write as if I had a choice.


  • kiwikrazi37
    July 31, 2007

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    This is wonderful! And jesseramsey said you're young, so this is an outstanding piece for a younger poet! I don't know how young you are lol but I'll trust jesser. Yes, keep writing. You're fantastic. Thanks for your entry

  • jesseramsey
    July 18, 2007

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    very good

    Its always cool to read a younger poets work. I like your way of expressing yourself.
    i look foward to reading your future work too.KEEP WRITING.

  • lpnurse
    July 16, 2007
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    BEAUTIFUL

    BEAUTIFUL!!!!!!!!! I VOTE "THE BEST POET" IN MY EYES

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