Flames across
the obstacle strucken field;
breathless;
approaching
the crispness,
warmth breezing my skin,
through danger;
the clock shreds inside
of my mind,
to live
or
die, no meaning-
(escaped.)
A contest entry
- quikies 10/15/30 Happy Birthday to me Contest by Angel w o Wings by Angel w o Wings.
450 points, ended July 16, 2007, 5 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Quickie with a Twist II by MuddyKing.
475 points, ended July 16, 2007, 6 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Very vivid images these lines leave us with - liked the brevity of the lines and the gold trophy this one wins. Way to go.
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this is an interesting write..well done
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This is a great take on play with fire.
good luck.
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I loved it!!!!!!
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very well done with the prompt. very powerful and emotionally charged, the title blends very well with this
best of luck in the contest. be well and be blessed
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