I try my best to show you that I care,
For my love I want to share.
I know your life right now is a bumpy road,
Through your pain, poetry it dose show.
I know I may not know you very well,
But I have so much to tell.
I want our friendship to grow,
I do care this you do know.
So please don't take your life away,
I know I can show you a brighter day.
I try my best to be there for you,
For my friendship is so true.
Throw away all of your pain and fear,
No longer dose your heart have to shed a tear.
I try my best to be your guide,
Please don't ever think about suicide.
I pray for you at night,
For this poem I wrote for you tonight.
Author notes
I wrote this for someone I hope that she read this and rethink this over. An for others out there I want them to do the same.
With Love
Amber
Please tell me what you think
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Amber you put so much energy into your poetry one can feel your voice...lots of love
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Wow thanks
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You are very caring in this frantic uncaring world,
you could always show her your poem.
check (dose) it should be does.
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Thanks for reading.
Amber
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If only they could see
Very well penned write here .Sometimes young people get into a click and feels their is nothing beyond it . But its that which is beyond that holds the spice of life should you feel alone .Reach out and at least give the future a chance beyond your regular space find their are so many out there who needs someone as well -
So thoughtful of you, I hope this friend appreciates your concern and let it sink in, and turn a fresh leaf, leaving behind the strugglelol
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Thank you for reading.
Amber
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This is a sad write but I can relate to the feelings sometimes life just seems to much for some of us.Thank you for shairng this with me best wishes and much love
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Thank you so much for reading I'm glad you liked it.
Amber
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GREAT
Wow...very good. You're such a nice person Amber, you truely are. Amazing job. Oh and I hope that girl changed her mind...
Keep writing and God Bless
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Thanks for reading. An thaks for your nice comment please read more.
Amber
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Excellent !
Wow another great poem. All the works on this site are top notch. Keep up the great work.
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Thank you for reading.
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Wow! I am stunned this is such a good poem. I want to cry. I can not believe you wrote this for while you what I mean. This means so much. I hope that our friendship can move toward great lengths. I am trying so hard to move away from that and to have my britter better days to come. You did such a good job.
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A tear falls, from my cheek, I'm glad you liked it. An I know some days are bitter and cold. But you have to stay strong I know you'll see brighter and better days.
Amber
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EXCELLENT AND HEART FELT
You are truly the best friend anyone could have . You hold up hope and love to sheild them from harm and you wrap it with a friendship . Great work here and for those who read this work and not feel love needs to read it again for it is truly a hand reaching out to all who needs love in its purest form
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Yes, you are right an not only for her for everybody. Even a simple poem, friend, love, and care can make a big difference. When I was in the 9th grade we had a speaker come to our school to talk about suicide and he told us if you or a friend is thinking about that the best thing anyone can do is talk to them/someone show them you do care and understand, spend time with them. Show them how to control their anger or sadness by talking about they feel, writing about they feel. An if you can't help them or yourself then seak help to an higher level. I know there's a hot-line you can call if that what it takes then call it. But most of all show that person or yourself that you do care.
Amber
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