Its ripping in two
Its aching and swelling
Its shattering to pieces when your not around
Its calling out to you
Please stay
Please dont shatter my heart
Please tell me what you think
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very adorable dude......short but sweet....ill look 4 more...
much jugga luv
^^@Y63N -
This is so cute! I love it. It's the thoughts of every girl around someone they love. It is amazing. I love it so much. You did so great, and I love this poem
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I love the fact that this poem is so simple, yet overflowing with intensity. Every line make you feel more and more of the emotion conveyed. I absolutely loved this piece!
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omg, i love it. it's so sad, but so gorgious at the same time. It's so short but to the point. I love it a lot. It is really good. You have such an amazing gift
-Holly -
very good poem. To the point. Painful. Well done
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This is so good. I love how it's short and to the point. You did a great job with this. Beautiful write. I like it a lot
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Wow.
I love this. It's so full of emotion. I tend to like rhyme the most, but this works very well. Nice job!
<3BD9
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very nice, I love freestyle writing because it always seems to show more emotion. You show great fear in this piece. The fear of the people you love leaving you. very nice. Short and sweet. Great Write
-Brian-
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awwww it heart breakeng make me wanna cry so strong for a shorty poem
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