The Forlorn Love Song
w. peter Sanci July 14 /2007
I dedicate this poem to my beautiful wife leni. Who has stuck by me in the
Good times and the bad. Leni I love you
With all of my heart.
My heart reaches out to you
But you hear me not.
For you alone I live,
But you don’t even know I exist.
My song in my heart has ceased.
It’s rhyme has been silenced.
For it no longer needs to sing.
It no longer has purpose.
You see me yet, you look through me.
Hear me speak, yet you do not hear my words.
My life has become dry,
My life had stopped.
Life’s brings people together,
Close for a time, then far apart.
We were close for that magic moment,
Now we are so far apart, I cry.
A contest entry
- *POW* = Poem of the Week ~* by Arkbear.
500 points, ended July 16, 2007, 11 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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aww, what a beautiful poem. I love it.
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Midnighteyes !
Why thanks so much for you're very kind words about my poem. I apprciate them so very much. -
Amber !
I just want to thank you for you're very kind words about my poem. I appreciate them so very much.
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Loved it very much.....however...>>
I need you to dip your Quill a bit deeper and reach out for
what you are not accustomed to writing and pen me
something that is going to make me want to personally
hand you the Trophy for Poem of the Week myself ~
This is good....but the POW wants GREAT!
I see talent in your Quill.... now show me the magic within!
The new POD is up for today & tomorrow ~
BUT PLEEEEEZ....watch out for the *common* Themes ~
Bear ~
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