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Onyx

With a kiss on my hand and a nudge on my cheek,
you always show how much you care for me.
Your smoky green eyes are filled with great mystery,
as I sit there petting you and you stare back at me.
My beautiful cat, how you amaze me,
from the games that you play, to how free you still seem.
And when night time has fallen, me and the baby lay down,
you still find new ways to surprise and amaze.
You come and you clean her,
oh how you must care,
you watch and you keep her from harm.
Laying at her feet as she crawls,
or running to see when she crys what is wrong.
Wonderful kitty I hope that you know,
I love you as much as you do me,
and I am glad that this is your home!

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  • Foofy
    May 8
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    best ever!


  • psychiatrists dream
    November 27, 2007
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    I'm sure your cat would love this poem, lovely writing, thanks for entering and good luck


  • Miss Chievous
    July 18, 2007

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    have a cat thats almost like yours

    Good luck
    and you should see my poem for the contest. IT's called

    The cat



  • Sinnastarr silver member
    July 17, 2007

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    I love cats. This is a very cute poem. It is very well written. I also like how the cat as portrayed as a guardian for the baby. Really good writing. I hope you win the contest.


  • Nephalaneous lover
    July 16, 2007

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    your cat is sweet, never scratched me or anything lol, great write

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