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outside my window

you envy me so
everywhere I go
you follow me there

but why can't you look me in the eyes?

you love me, yes
or is my chest
outside my window is best

stay there if you won't just go away

you really don't know me
in your head a fantasy
my face a picture you put to a story

and it doesn't rhyme. and it isn't mine.

Author notes

This is the girl's response to the creep outside her window.

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this is about the stalker I heard in the lyrics of the song. Read the lyrics if you want to understand, then give me a comment.

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  • dream5111
    July 16, 2007

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    haha

    "you really don't know me
    in your head a fantasy
    my face a picture you put to a story

    and it doesn't rhyme. and it isn't mine. " is my favorite part i like ur view on this song good luck
  • x-Black-Butterfly-x silver member
    July 16, 2007

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    i love this its so very true.
    im sure evry girl woudl think like this
    a crazy stalker welll...get out lol.
    awsomly done
    well done