you envy me so
everywhere I go
you follow me there
but why can't you look me in the eyes?
you love me, yes
or is my chest
outside my window is best
stay there if you won't just go away
you really don't know me
in your head a fantasy
my face a picture you put to a story
and it doesn't rhyme. and it isn't mine.
Author notes
This is the girl's response to the creep outside her window.
A contest entry
- Niki FM by dream5111.
300 points, ended July 27, 2007, 5 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
this is about the stalker I heard in the lyrics of the song. Read the lyrics if you want to understand, then give me a comment.
Comments
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haha
"you really don't know me
in your head a fantasy
my face a picture you put to a story
and it doesn't rhyme. and it isn't mine. " is my favorite part i like ur view on this song good luck -
i love this its so very true.
im sure evry girl woudl think like this
a crazy stalker welll...get out lol.
awsomly done
well done


