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Why did you die,when I was so young That's all that raced through my mind that unfortunate day Wish I could have seen you one last time Unfortunately for that wish didn't come true Not that day, the next, or any other day Sorry for all the wrongs that I had done Too bad you can't hear these words Now that I've grown so Dad I wish I could've known you more A contest entry
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by daonlylizzOn Jul 16 1:13 PM 2007Last login November 24
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