"Let me look at you."
White hands reach out,
Touch your face,
Cold as ice and thin.
"Let me read your fears."
Those eyes shine gold,
In the dark,
You cannot see a face.
"Let me twist your mind."
Those fingers turn to snakes,
Bite through your skin,
And melt into your brain.
"Let me show you pain."
That is when you hear it,
Coming from every side.
Agonizing screaming,
And a never ending "Why!?"
Someone else's breathing,
Is getting very short.
You can't place it,
And then your blood runs cold.
You see a twisted smile,
Lighting up the dark.
That deadly voice pulls you deeper.
It closes the door behind,
And it fully locks you inside.
You can't breathe,
And your body falls limp.
The screams are even louder than before,
And you try to fight it back.
You close your eyes and wait,
As it all fades to black.
Soft pressure on your neck,
Wakes you up from your dream.
Your eyes burst open,
And the screams are deafening.
Consumed in the dark.
The screams were your own,
And you are left there to bleed.
Silent.
And hard like stone.
That flicker of that smile fades,
And nothings left,
But an echo,
Of a twisted,
Tortured,
Plea.
Author notes
Allpoetry Name: Xy Maya
Name: Maya
Age: 17
A contest entry
- I need an allpoetry Girlfriend (ladies only--winner take all) by Intravenous Jesus.
2400 points, ended August 19, 2007, 16 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Never Forget, Never Let Go by trista.
450 points, ended November 30, 2007, 27 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Thank you for taking the time to enter, but I really do not see how this relates to the theme of my contest. It's possible I'm missing something here, and if so maybe you could let me know what kind of memory this is that you would never want to forget or let go of. I like dark writes in general and this definitely gives me chills, it just doesn't seem to fit for this contest.
Thank you and best wishes,
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Ok my dear. Well done poetically. Your brilliance shines through. Now for content you gave me the Dam Willies. Very good!
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You don't realize how happy that makes me!!
Thank you very much!
I am glad you enjoyed it.
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Wow, that was cool! Very intense writing.
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at first i thought this was going to be about a vampire...and then i realized it could be about anything, and then i realized that its about a murder, and then i realized it was all 3, nice job
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