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Curiousity Kills the Community

[They hide under the napkins & wait for the end]

We hold on for this forever♥
just to linger inside a little more
we love to no end just to get killed by our friends
[perfect&prim is this stupid little neighborhood]

lustful in the bathroom stall
& kicking it in the bedroom
OUT are the lights & the candles are

S
W
  E
  P
    T

away, but are still dancing in the wax
blindfolded, they are spoonfed a bunch of lies
[We couldn't let them know the dirty little secrets]

Hiding behind the guitars & microphones
We secretly go inside your bedroom & perform our best
[guitar licks & vibrato romances to entrance us]

Whoa, I never meant to be a braggart
but, I'll put on my Sunday best
& sing my stupid little hymns
[Oh good God, here we fucking go again]

Nevermind about the details, ladies & gentleman
We'll go behind the curtains
& fall inside the preacher's podium for a little
[Let's show them what to talk about]

dirty little deeds to match the apple seeds
perfectly marked with our bodies
chaoticly undressed to impress
[oh mama, how do you feel about your little girl now?]

7 years difference, my ass
This romance doesn't make me a whore
[Put away your Bibles & now you see inside]

I'm crazy CRAZY crazy for him baby
& we commited the perfect crime:

[I stole his heart
&& he stole mine]

Cliche little phrases are what I hear
you have no idea what's happened:


Perfect love is the star of the scene
& nobody cares in the neighborhood
curiousity killed the cat
[& hung it in their perfect backyard]

perfectly in manuscript is their gossip talk
singing on the phone lines & dancing in the computers
[It has Faren&Scott written all over it]

Faren is in wonder[fucking] land
&& no matter how many times I

S
P
I
R
A
L

down the hole
[my feelings will never mean a thing]


downing the potions to make me taller
& crying a river to make everyone understand
[This is my superficial wonderland]

full of secrets & killing sprees
sexual pleasures within the tea parties
& a bitch in hearts to make it all happen


[I spiraled down the hole just to find you
just to find everyone wanted to take you away]

Author notes

Curiousity In The Neighborhood-reserved
LucyLightening

As soon as I saw this title, I knew the story I was going to write about. I've been going through some stuff with my parents& my boyyy & I decided to mix it with Alice In Wonderland. I hope you like, loveee. ♥

Dirty Pretty option =]]

Your Curious Little Pussycat Doll

maybe if my hearts stops beating it won't hurt this much

A contest entry

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Comments

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  • DrunktankLullaby
    August 9, 2007

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    "7 years difference, my ass
    This romance doesn't make me a whore
    [Put away your Bibles & now you see inside]

    I'm crazy CRAZY crazy for him baby
    & we commited the perfect crime:

    [I stole his heart
    && he stole mine]"

    that. right there. is what I wanted. beeeeautiful.
    & I love that you can actually relate to this prompt.
    Welll done, as always.

  • XweXareXbrokenX
    August 3, 2007

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    whoa...this is an amazing dirtypretty piece...i loved everything about it...great inspiration to...great job...thanks for entering

    XweXareXbrokenX


  • Exodus gold member
    July 27, 2007

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    Nevermind about the details, ladies & gentleman
    We'll go behind the curtains
    & fall inside the preacher's podium for a little
    [Let's show them what to talk about]

    dirty little deeds to match the apple seeds
    perfectly marked with our bodies
    chaoticly undressed to impress
    [oh mama, how do you feel about your little girl now?]



    Good GOD this is amazing hun! Wow. The entire thing had a sense of rhythm to it that I really liked, you could almost hear the beat of it in your head =]
    Thanks for this one


  • xxRainbowDawnxx
    July 24, 2007

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    Lovely dp here with great imagery... I loved this title myself, thought I'd maybe write one on this one, as I did come up with it after all! Very deep in many parts! Sounds a little like my old attitude in parts of the write.


  • Heartbeatsxfading
    July 19, 2007

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    I really like this

    I love how you make references to Alice In Wonderland

    My favorite lines were
    "lustful in the bathroom stall
    & kicking it in the bedroom
    OUT are the lights & the candles are

    S
    W
    E
    P
    T

    away, but are still dancing in the wax
    blindfolded, they are spoonfed a bunch of lies
    [We couldn't let them know the dirty little secrets]"

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