Away! Away!
Through the woods,
And over the hills!
Away! Away!
Far Away through the rocks,
And through the stream!
Though sometimes you will dream!
Away! Away!
We run Away and never ever look back!
We found some ground scorched black as black,
And we ran Away never to look back!
Five times we stopped but then we heard,
Far Away the dragon roar with rage!
Away! Away!
Through the night,
The dragon stoped chasing without a fight!
We settled down and never did hear,
The dragon ever roaring with fright and fear!
Author notes
Its a really fun poem.
In a list
A contest entry
- Creativity Please by deleteit.
1800 points, ended July 19, 2007, 14 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Make Me Love You [show me your best] by thelovesongwriter.
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Great poem! I particularly liked the third verse. It shows a bit more on the subject of the poem. Great job, and keep writing!!!
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Brilliant! it was awesome to read i really enjoyed this poem I really liked this part
Through the night,
The dragon stoped chasing without a fight!
We settled down and never did hear,
The dragon ever roaring with fright and fear
Fantastic write dude keep em coming!
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cool poem very adventurous. great write
best of luck&thanks for entering -
LOL this definitely cheered me up! I am almost out of breath from running with them too! I wondered what happened to the dragon though, hm. Well so long as he stopped chasing that is all that matters
Thank you for entering and the best of luck
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good job
This certainly is fun. An entry in a contest for creativity I believe this passes the test. Thanks for sharing. Lots of luck to you.
Brian
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