This is a big comitment
But something I shall take
For you
I would be lots of help
And not a broken-down snake
I would be honored
To be your AP brother
Because
I'm a good sport, funny and other
I like to help people
And make them good at things
But a question I must ask;
Do ever wear bling?
AP brother
I am honored to be
Please let me
Out of my little seed
And I can help you with your poetry needs.
A contest entry
- An AP Family--You can NEVER have enough family by LunaAmara.
1050 points, ended August 8, 2007, 10 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - I Want More Family (prewrites allowed) by SoftlyScreaming.
525 points, ended July 20, 2007, 22 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - ♥I want an AP brother!!!!!♥ by Slashes of Color.
320 points, ended July 28, 2007, 8 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - I'M AT IT AGAIN by Tempa Lee.
600 points, ended October 21, 2007, 13 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
This is a poem showing that I would love to be your AP brother!
Comments
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i don't care if i don't pick you to win i would love you to have as many family members as i can. so i would love for you and this beautiful poem to be apart of my AP family. and i love this poem like no other.
~Dani~
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hey, even though you didn't place in my contest, would you like to still be my ap brother? i'm still in the process of figuring out how to change things on here, so i couldn't figure out how to add another honorable mention
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sure id like to be your ap bro
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This is so sweet. You made me want you to be my AP brother, so I guess you really deserve your silver trophy. One line that I was wondering about, is the line:
"Do ever wear bling?"
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Very nicely done, bravo. I think you would be an excellent brother. I love the rhyme scheme and how you set up this poem......This is exactly what I was looking for, so thank you so much for this great entry. I love how you really put some love into this....the very best of luck in my contest, I hope you do well..............
♥♥♥♥♥♥
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how sweet... i would love for you to be my brother, but i really want to get to know you first okay.. so write me some time (bc obviously i dont know your name) and we'll talk
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it sounds like you're committed to be my AP brother, which is good to hear
I'm glad. I like how ever other line rhymes, I like rhyming.
good luck in my contest
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Very nice. I think you'd make a great AP brother for this person. I hope they accept you. If not, I'm sure they can always count on you as a friend. Nicely done.
Brian -
Ohh. So sweet. Hope you do get a nice loving AP brother.
Luv,
Candy
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