Lavender dreams
and twilight shadows
misty moonlight
lurking hearts.
Rambling rhymes
with no ending
poetic prose
now torn apart.
Tie my thoughts
in tiny bundles
a little scattered
to form in rows.
Strike the match
turn them to cinder,
so my words
are left unknown.
Author notes
alright I rambled down paths I couldn't even have foreseen. But it was fun.
A contest entry
- Rhyming Ramblings by piccola.
700 points, ended July 20, 2007, 29 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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I like it too...but I don't discern any real rhyme and the contest is specifically for rhyme.
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Ah my rambling rose
beautifully written, flows nicely, best of luck in the contest dear...Scott
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he he i loved this,
sometimes rambling away can be fun
like a break from making any sense at all
i loved it.
well done and bestof luck
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