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Upward Dance of Posture and Lines

A step to the beat(ing cracks of the walking side)
I move my lips to motion
A city scene and quiet place(ing of my mind)

She says to me
"Darling, where is your coat"
"Darling, it is far too cold"

In these streets I've moved the lines
To layer the mechanical towers,
An unforgivable match of man and falling clouds

And I say to her
"Darling, we are but contestants"
"Darling, this is but a game"

Where moving day to day
Is a manner of invading the drink
Of a chaos theory and lively reef
That makes our city sink (like the ships)
Of the world while racing streams
Move my eyes and bend around time

Author notes

The talking streets walk the plank.
The walking scenes talk of play.

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  • tara wilson gold member
    July 23, 2007

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    "That makes our city sink (like the ships)
    Of the world while racing streams
    Move my eyes and bend around time"
    I really like these lines...thank you so much for your entry!


  • Fey Absinthe
    July 16, 2007

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    I like this one alot. I dig your style of writin' brover~ good luck in the contest and I hope you win!!!