Take apart this hollowed heart
And leave me breathless still
I would trade all that I own
To touch your face at will
Turn from me and you will see
A man fall to his knees
Whisper soft and speak of love
Of this I beg you, please
Walk away with great dismay
To me will cause great strife
Not to love, my flying dove
Your words cut like a knife
As I stand I take your hand
You quickly pull away
My eyes have drawn the curtain shut
You’ve ended life today
A contest entry
- Rhyming Ramblings by piccola.
700 points, ended July 20, 2007, 29 entries
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what can I say? This left me sighing and smiling...the rhyme and flow are great; it's romantic and I love every word. thank you for this wonderful entry.
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Oh! Thanks!
How sweet of you!! Thanks for your great comments. It put a smile on my face!!
Monique
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Romantic rambling at it's finest. This was a lovely poem.
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Thanks for your kind words!
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Beautiful rhyming.
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