When my soul strikes the waves of the sea
at the strands of loose sand particles
the heart eventually builds castles at the beach stands
putting my mind completely to unknown hard ship
When my glances are shot at the blank,unclouded sky
the rain of the incessant tears surprises me
The air that breezes comfortably to safer zones
shocks me at times with its blasting performances
I sit and wait for my beloved! lonely
with deep stripes of affection
and expect her at any time to arrive at
to hug me tight with showering affinity
Author notes
LOVE NEVER RATTLES IN BLANKNESS
A contest entry
- Dig Deep (CONTEST) by Touchof1der.
600 points, ended July 21, 2007, 9 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - The very best you have (ROUND 1) by Xgeekdreamgonewrong.
340 points, ended August 12, 2007, 86 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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I feel a deep sense of longing on the protagonists part. You have done a great job inflicted emotion into your words. Thanks you for entering my contest and good luck
♥ Touchof1der -
really passionate
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