White feathered wings
opening to the wind
ready to soar once again
Fallen angel looks towards the skies
no longer bound to Earth
Reaching for the clouds
returning to Heaven
Author notes
30 words only
A contest entry
- Angelic Encounters by ScarletO.
300 points, ended July 16, 2007, 8 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Thi was a good take on the prompt you puta a lot into 30 words over all that is pretty good.
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I like this poem because quick and to the point but also I like the lines:
White feathered wings
opening to the wind
ready to soar once again.
I hope you write many more like it.
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A wonderful moment to envision as the angel flies back to heaven. Thanks for your entry.
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Well Done daughter
I like this, you have done great, Love dad
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Thanks, Dad!
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Cassie, you must be that angel on the return trip. Such a great, yet short poem from you. Bravo on your part.
Justin -
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Tankies!
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i loved this. its so truthful and has wonderful and fantastic rhythm and flow and imagery.i really love this,keep writing sis
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Thank you so much!
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WoW!
This is beautiful! With the strict word count you penned a piece of art. You brought my mind on a flight of rebirth.
Love,
Amera ♥
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Thank you yet again!
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