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The Guf

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The Guf


God gave man the number seven,
He showed me a place that’s far above.
High up in the seventh heaven,
a place that’s filled with constant love.

He showed me a place that’s far above;
I saw the treasury of souls.
Where unborn souls reside thereof
and wait to fill their human roles.

High up in the seventh heaven,
resides the sacred Hall of Souls.
A baby's spirit still un-leaven,
a loving place that God controls.

A place that’s filled with constant love;
so when you hear the sparrows’ song,
a descending spirit falls like a dove
and to our God, we all belong.

 

 

 

Author notes

Source: Wikipedia,

In Jewish mysticism , the Chamber of Guf (or Guph or even Gup) ( Hebrew for "body" or "corpse") also called the Otzar (Hebrew for "treasury") is the Hall of Souls , located in the Seventh Heaven . Every human soul is held to emanate from the Guf. The Talmud teaches that the Messiah will not come until the Guf is emptied of all its souls (Yev. 62a). The mystic significance of the Guf is that each person is important and has a unique role which only he, with his unique soul, can fulfill. Even a newborn baby brings the Messiah closer simply by being born. In keeping with other Jewish legends that envision souls as bird-like, the Guf is sometimes described as a columbarium , or birdhouse . Folklore says sparrows can see the soul's descent and this explains their joyous chirping. The peculiar idiom of describing the treasury of souls as a "body" may be connected to the mythic tradition of Adam Kadmon , the primordial man. Adam Kadmon, God's "original intention" for humanity, was a supernal being, androgynous and macro-cosmic (co-equal in size with the universe). When this Adam sinned, humanity was demoted to the flesh and blood, bifurcated and mortal creatures we are now. According to Kabbalah, every human soul is just a fragment (or fragments) cycling out of the great "world-soul" of Adam Kadmon. Hence, every human soul comes from the "guf [of Adam Kadmon]."  

 

 Retourne:

Like so many other French forms, the retourne is all about repetition. It contains four quatrains (four-line stanzas), and each line has eight syllables. The trick is that the first stanza's second line must also be the second stanza's first line, the first stanza's third line is the third stanza's first, and the first stanza's fourth line is the fourth stanza's first. Retournes do not have to rhyme.
form source: shadowpoetry.com

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  • Seeking Peace silver member
    July 20, 2007

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    Well done on such a unique write... 7 is a lucky number for me, has been all my life so interesting that you chose this... well done

    Thankyou for taking the time to enter this contest, I wish you all the best of luck

    Karen


  • JohnnyD gold member
    July 18, 2007

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    Seven.....interesting number, as I have said before ai have lived with six and married a seventh. Who the eighth shall be is unknown at this juncture. Hopefully one I know, but perhaps not, fate will determine that. Nice flow and message.....



    Dad


  • Whoochi gold member
    July 17, 2007

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    I dont think I have read anything more touching, more spiritual and grace-filled than this...Always teaching me Dollface...one of the many splendid reasons why I love you so much! Excellent! Excellent!


  • HaleyMary
    July 16, 2007

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    Beautiful write. This piece seemed magical and left the reader with a feeling of peace. Good luck in the contest.


  • Desire gold member
    July 16, 2007

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    Magnificent!!

    What words You have brought forth to inhale and Inspire for You created a Gorgeous form~
    Form Queen
    also shared Your words of Wisdom and enlightened
    me with much information I thoroughly enjoyed reading~
    Magnificent tale You have weaved!!
    Loved this!!
    Wooooooooooooo hooooooooooooooo

    Best wishes to You in the contest
    Many blessings too
    and much love~ Desire~*~


  • RedAquarius
    July 16, 2007

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    I had never heard of this so was quite interested through the write and with the author's notes. Not only is it lovely but also enlightening - a true piece of art.


  • sunny day
    July 16, 2007

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    Bravo!!! Bravo!!! Bravo!!! This is a wonderful Retourne my dear friend and I haven't seen or written one myself in a while. You chose a powerful subject and took it to the limit. We never want that hall to be empty of souls, may it constantly be replenished and that sparrow forever sing his happy song. I loved the movie, "The Seventh Sign" with Demi Moore. I think she is a great actress and played a wonderful role in this as the mother of the coming messiah. I got chills reading this one. Thank you for sharing and best wishes in the contest. Love you my friend, Joyce


  • StarEyes
    July 16, 2007

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    Miss Form Queen.... How do you do it?! This is amazing!! I must learn how to write this way! I love it!! I also love the story line/myth you used for this one!

    Best of luck in this contest!

    Love ya,

    Nyetta


  • And Hyetal
    July 16, 2007

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    Wow, I love how you interpreted this myth!!! And you know I love the Retourne. You're SUCH an amazing writer!!!!!!!!!!

    Always,
    Cassie

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