I decided to take a long nap
As I grab the bottle & pop off its cap
I began to count each pill
As my tears slowly spill
I don't want to live any more
This is the only opportunity knocking at my door
I'll take them and walk somewhere to rest
That way I am no longer anyones pest
Screwing up everyones life is what I seem to do
So I decided to try something new
I'll lay where no one knows me & without I.D.
No peace while living, maybe now I can R.I.P.
This is the hardest decision I ever had to make
But living seems like an even bigger mistake.
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omg, this is so powerful! I had tears ome to my eyes at the end of this pieceand your title really drew me in. I know exactly what you are saying, very well done darl this is excellently written
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thank you
I'm sorry I made tears come to your eyes. I am glad that you enjoyed my poem non the less. I will keep in touch through your poems. Hope you do the same w/ mine.
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Hmmm...
Your words always seem to touch some part of my life. -
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I hope this type of poem would never come close to you babygurl. I'm saden to know that. Let me know if I can help, you know I'm always here for you
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Wow
I like this poem because of the way u put your words and because it makes u realize that this is how life actually is...
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thank you
For some of us, yes it is our reality and others can only just imagine
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