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timeless seed

 

take my hand

in firmer grasp

of Soul,

to follow brighter path

in harmony of greener glen

 

where scent

of season's leaves are heady

perfume felled in wilder wake,

of soothing footfalls gentle charm

 

in meadow's

moister glade, of purer sight,

flows softer moss

and stream's delight

of sooth to simmer sound of peace

 

proposed in bowers

sacred bubble,

bursting in archaic speech

of life to float in sea of reasoned

bliss to bear you off your feet

 

where breeze curves tender

true caress, in light conveyed,

as Spirit's test of higher flight,

on soaring wing of deeper mind

 

of woven link to beauty's bounty,

creation nurtured under Nature

 

take pause to taste

on tongue so sweet

the color of the Sun, as heat

to nourish placid souls

cool nectar,

swallowing of fears released

 

where every joy

is every breath

in sear of rain upon your cheek,

to freely flow in mix of tears

too long retained in bitter grief

 

where free is gained

in blade of grass,

to cushion pillowed Soul in lie

upon an ancient bed of blood

in boil, as vein feeds starving hearts,

with greater love relieved

 

surrender's quest, as timeless seed

 

 

 

 

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  • Blue Rew silver member
    July 18, 2007

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    Gives such unbound strength to emotions.
    I love the feeling I get of those hurts and
    fears released so that a healing can begin.
    Blue


  • Tangled Angle
    July 18, 2007

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    Excellent job, the rhyme was great for this poem, made the poem's flow go along smoothly and even added some good emphasis. I thought you developed the metaphor and the imagery really well too. Very profound. One of my favorites of yours.


  • Desire gold member
    July 16, 2007

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    Wow!!

    Love this and the images You bring forth busy bee also the words~ sacred bubble~
    surrender's quest just grabs..
    (look, I'm being grabbed)
    Magnificent piece and I am doing some serious catch up~
    Woooooooooooooo hoooooooooooo
    Best wishes to You in the contest
    Many blessings too
    and much love~ Desire~*~

  • deleteit
    July 16, 2007

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    All I can say is Wow!!!

    I read this twice and I still can't get enough! Your words just seem to strum the heart and emotions while drifting the mind into this creation of sweet peace and contentment, unhindered and unafraid. Thank you so much for entering and the best of luck