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Sunday

It was a Sunday-
Yes I remember now-
The watch read a number
Past twelve noon.

The bus was crowded
Even for a weekend

((Nowhere to sit))

Until I saw the empty spot
Next to where you were sitting

I think I would never forget
The black pants and white shirt
That you were wearing with your smile

It’s funny how I remember now
The shortness of breath when you
Smiled    s i d e w a y s  at me

The way we were sitting
Way too close for strangers
And how our fingers almost touched
As the bus pulled at your stop

And then...

You got down- with a soft goodbye.

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Trust me- this never happened

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  • tara wilson gold member
    July 23, 2007

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    This is such a lovely, lovely poem...thank you for your entry...I love that...wearing clothes with the smile...
    and the ending line...