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Wicked Love

His eyes gaze upon your beauty
Love is the word that jumps to mind
Your skin magnificent to touch
Your lips lusciously bright red

 

Release comes easy for him

Your enchantment has cast a spell

His hands grasp, his breath stops

As he feels the apex of your love draining

 

He would never defile your perfection

You are the epiphany of gorgeous

His hand tightens around your neck

As his heart picks up a beat

 

You struggle for the vital essence of life

Eyes start bulging as lips turn blue

 

He has had his fill of your love

and needs to move on ....

 

 

 

 

Author notes

What must go through a murderers mind when claiming the lives of women??? Could it be love or is it complete madness???
Sadly, our society has too many excuses for these 'beings'
This was a disturbing write, but I'm hoping that there is a little human in them to feel love ...

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  • Tattboy silver member
    August 6, 2007

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    Well done My pet and a well deserved Gold trophy.

    re. what you asked yesterday, no you are not a dark person, but you can tap into your dark side so well!

    (Does your Mum write?)


  • PassionsPromise gold member
    July 29, 2007

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    THis my gawdddddddddd girl i think i would rather read your erotics lol this one scared the hell out of me. Well penned poet. Should be a winner in my eyes.
    now i will have to stay awake all night lol.....
    sleep wont com eeasy for sure
    Tory


  • whispering shadow
    July 17, 2007
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    gruesome

    just what I want,


  • HaleyMary
    July 16, 2007

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    Powerful write. It is sad that there are people in this world who will torture and kill people. When I hear society make excuses for these monsters, it makes me wonder if they would feel the same way if the victim were a friend or family member. I have heard people make excuses for the mentally ill, too, whether schizophrenic or some other mental illness. Deep down, it makes me sick and I'm glad that there is a justice system out there to lock these guys up so they can't kill any more people than they already have. Best of luck in the contests.

    • Tattboyspet
      July 17, 2007
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      Thank you for your comment and the clap Arzab ... much appreciated
      It is so very unfortunate that these creatures get the pleasure of breathing isn't it?


  • malevolent
    July 16, 2007
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    Love It!

    I love this! You did a great job on this and I look forward to reading more of your work.


    • Tattboyspet
      July 19, 2007
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      thank you for taking the time to read my poetry - much appreciated

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