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The Forbidden Love!

A simple "KISS"
A loving "TOUCH".
These are the things
That mean so much.

To hold you close
On long cold nights.
Being next to you
Makes things all right!

The images play
Out in my mind.
A love like your's
I'm sure is kind.

Sweet as the taste
Of bitter-sweets.
Your love's much sweeter
Than "CANDY TREATS"

Of this I dream
Thou it's not real.
I hope someday
Your heart to steal.

And if this is
But just a dream.
The love I feel
So real it seem!

To hold you close
And whisper your name.
And engage you in
This "LOVING GAME".

My soul I'd give
For you to play.
And have you for
"MY LOVE ONE DAY"

Author notes

Kennethlaney (Forbidden Love)

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  • Ignis Corpus
    July 16, 2007

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    wow i love this poem also, good job i love this part "Sweet as the taste
    Of bitter-sweets.
    Your love's much sweeter
    Than "CANDY TREATS"" good luck in the contes


    • kennethlaney
      July 16, 2007
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      Thank you for your comments Beauty.
      Glad you liked the poem! You have an impressive author's page. As far as thoughts and theology. Some very good life's beliefs for to be so young. Will check out your poetry later.
      "BOO"