I lick your freshly cut cheek, salty tears
I've never seen you more elegant
I haven't seen you more, afraid
I find this more beautiful than, anything
I kiss you gently, you fight back
This is getting me excited, I like it
too bad it's a one night-stand
I'd love to call you back
I watch you close your eyes, fun's over
I play around for a while, cut you up
This isn't fun anymore, since you're gone
I let my tears run free for your sake
Loving someone is hard enough,
let alone having to kill them for a valid reason
a reason I can't seem to think of.
Author notes
I don't know. so sick dude killing someone because they think they love 'em. I hope this didn't go against anything you said...
Wicked clowns
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- Horrific - love (shock me) by whispering shadow.
450 points, ended August 3, 2007, 8 entries
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Comments
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WOW
YAY! THIS IS SOOO ROMANTIC! Haha, my idea of a one night stand. LOL.
Well written, i love this. Very dark, sadistic and twisted.
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brill
this certainly is sick
Loving someone is hard enough,
let alone having to kill them for a valid reason
this bit was wicked -
So real, its surreal
Ex, I have been killed (metaphorically) in this manner. Your words brought tears and fears to me as I pondered her doing this to me recently. While I do not like dragging myself over shards of glass, I did so by reading your poem five times. Each time I felt just a little bit less cut -- a little bit less made the object of someone else's satanic-like vengeance.
She took him soft in her warm embrace
Shared his bed in her finest lace
Then just blinded him with her mace
And prepared his final resting place
poet43
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Excellent write - I enjoyed this one tremendously - well done on a truly dark write
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