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never spoken

 

silence slices air

in slimmer molecule to measure

metered breath, as birth of heartbeat

beating drum in ear, as fear

of what one is

without the other

 

where loss is taste

of flower crumbled,

dust to cling

a past to tongue

in cleave of separation, sorrowed

 

when ache of linger, longs in loins

of fantasy figures

future time warp,

woven in a nest of rhyme

 

and calm is call, to treasons meeting

marching to pure passions rhythm,

in rock of soul,

as smoke in bowl; inhaled prayer

of spirits tremble

 

never spoken

 

 

 

 

Author notes

“Never allow someone to be your priority while allowing yourself to be their option”


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  • Cinnarry gold member
    July 22, 2007
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  • Tangled Angle
    July 16, 2007

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    Powerful poem, very deep. Loved it.
    I liked how in the middle-ish-beginning-ish [somewhere! lol] you used rhyme, I thought it added good emphasis, nice job on that.

    Excellent poem, and good luck in the contest that you entered.