There is something inside me
It drives me to feel
Feel something profound
Its hard to decipher
Its hard to understand
It’s a feeling inside me
A mixture of hate, love, despair…
A blend of emotions…
So similar and different
It grows like a bubble inside me
Makes my heart turn,
My stomach heave
This pain that’s inside me
It wants to get out
wants to be free
I hold it down tight
For fear of what may come up
Might consume me
Might drive me to do things
Things I’ll regret
Some may be scared of this feeling
But I’m just determined
Determined to fight this feeling
I won’t let it gain control
I am my own master
This feeling won’t enslave me
Only I can overcome it
I need all the help I can get
But only I can finish this fight
Wish me good luck
God knows I need it
its a work in progress so be honest, i want to know what you REALLY think
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I feel your pain, manbearpig. I do. I liked this poem, because it was so true. CYA MOON BUDDY!
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its was good...somthing from the heart...good job!!!
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I hope you find inner peace some day.
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Emotional struggles... They are very hard to deal with, and they take a whole lot out of you. This is a good poem, and yes that is what I REALLY think. This is about your raw feelings pouring out onto the keyboard, which is great. Awesome job. IM me if you need anything. ~ Kerri
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The only thing I would suggest is to break it up a little either with a ~ in between or break it into stanzas. That may help the reader pay more attention and help with the flow.
Peace and Love
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GOOD LUCK!!! *hugs u* this is an awsome fighting encouraging write. seriously love it
!! You can do it!! your strong, you'll make it through! 
keep it up amo!
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