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Are you the one?

Are you the one
who was sitting
at the outdoor cafe
located at Fifth and Elm
about three in the afternoon
last Friday?

Wearing that bright red hat,
stunning strapless black silk dress,

exquisite diamond necklace,

and a nice big pink carnation corsage
attached to the voluptuous bosom?

You ordered the spinach quiche
with white wine,
ate it so delicately
looking so incredibly refined.

I was mesmerized
by your enchanting vision of loveliness
couldn't move or speak,
but you have haunted
my every thought
since then.

Oh please, please
give this poor love torn heart
a chance to meet you?

Please reply to Box 696?

(P.S. Loved your handlebar mustache.
I was the one in the blue mu-mu
with shocking pink fright wig.
Compliments my red beard.)

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  • tara wilson gold member
    July 23, 2007

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    LOL...this is great...the first part is so seductive and the ending was hilarious...thank you so much for your entry!

  • Yvette Champ gold member
    July 18, 2007

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    Oh my,loved this,was completely lost within the imagery and the longing and then kapow!The surprize was a gift that gifted a smile and a giggle,well done,this is written well,original and humorous btw I like your dress sense lol


  • Dalaney gold member
    July 17, 2007

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    ha! Damn, you got me!
    Okay, this is cute and clever
    and better than the coffee
    I am drinking this morning...

    Love, Lane


    • penman gold member
      July 17, 2007
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      Guess you could call that a morning wake up call huh? Thanks for the great comment.


  • Desire gold member
    July 17, 2007
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    OMG!!


    Drops

    Now that is a sight for some serious images

    HOLY MOLY!
    Love this

    Oh Geez...I bet somebody caught that on camera

    Thank You for sharing this Sweetness

    Many blessings to You in the contest
    Best wishes too
    and my Love~ Desire~*~


    • penman gold member
      July 17, 2007
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      Yep. Really impressive personal huh? Thank you sweetness.


  • Mori-lux
    July 16, 2007
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    lmao this was great and adorable. good job. and good luck


  • purpledragonfly
    July 16, 2007

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    LOL --- ok, it was me!! This is great! Another stellar piece (as usual) from you! I loved the ending because you really had me going with the beginning
    Great luck to you in the contest!! Betsy


    • penman gold member
      July 16, 2007

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      So that explains why that silk scarf you had included a dragonfly image. Thanks for the great comment.

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