lost vision walking through in time
where eyes have seen enough
but dazzled by beauty so mesmerizing
as wisdom gazed at me
that my soul was changed
after this encounter
Author notes
30 words only
A contest entry
- Angelic Encounters by ScarletO.
300 points, ended July 16, 2007, 8 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Wonderful
Very well done. A great poem on the experience of angels. Congrats on the silver.
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that's good
i like it
its good
gifted soul of the aching
or should i say of the orro
rescuer from the layer
Essentially played to stay the same
doesn't make sense to me either i just wrote for fun
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Very good description of your encounter and flowed so well. thanks for your entry.
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sorry for the trouble..
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