Waiting at the bus stop.
Outside the chip shop.
In the pouring rain.
Our brollies were the same,
I didn't catch your name.
But I think I love you.
Sure you felt it too,
Yours waiting
Jayne
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A contest entry
- You, were wearing a green dress... by tara wilson.
1700 points, ended July 30, 2007, 19 entries
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I am sorry, I am not sure what 'brollies' are...lol...this is so sweet...I have seen many men I've felt love at first sight...thank you for your entry!
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Sorry,brollies are slang name for umbrellas ! I forget that us English have strange words for things. Thanks for comment
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lol...thank you...that is so cute...same umbrellas
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yes this is sweet shelly. you are cute sometimes and people must be dying to shower you with trophys . just one thing whos jayne?
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