[[Precious Dove]]
A message and a rose,
Left here for me,
By my best friend,
Written gracefully.
I hold in my hands,
I tale of true love,
Written by you,
Signed "Precious Dove"
Baby I love you,
With all of my heart,
Take me away,
Til' death do us part.
Velvet red rose,
My favorite scent,
Dew drops allure,
A beautiful accent.
Time takes it's toll,
You have stayed by my side,
Having you here,
Leaves no reason to cry.
I have all I want,
That is just you,
Together infinitely,
Always staying true.
So caress me in your arms,
This all seems to real,
It's better than magic,
And no one could steal,
What we have had,
The years through the years,
Good times and bad,
You silenced all my fears.
A message and a rose,
Left here for me,
By my true love.
Written gracefully.
[[Enchanted Place]]
Free my soul,
With elegant grace,
I run to spot,
I call "Enchanted Place."
Walking down a gravel road,
Not too far from my home,
Velvet roses,
Lead the way,
Down this path,
To my "Enchanted Place."
Song birds chyme,
As the day begins,
Beautiful rhymes,
Their notes sound like hymns.
The sun starts to rise,
Colorful arrays fill the sky...
It leaves me breathless.
Tears of joy fill my eyes,
This is such amazing place,
I come to relax,
Just for a day,
Its like my own escape.
The sound of the leaves,
By the wind in the tress,
Takes me away,
To a magical place.
Free my soul,
With elegant grace,
I hate to leave,
My "Enchanted Place."
Author notes
( I wrote "Precious Dove" for a contest...
but once again I didn't read it right....
so "Enchanted Place" is the one I wrote for the contest)
A contest entry
- Creativity Please by deleteit.
1800 points, ended July 19, 2007, 14 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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I thought both were really beautifully written. "Precious Dove" is adorable and it did grab my heart on another level. Enchanted Place definitely took my mind away into some like secret getaway made just for one. You touched upon senses in a way that made it seem so real. Wonderful writing skills. Thank you for entering and the best of luck
